Textual and Film Critique Argument. (See Writing Project II, this is the rubric)
My Claim: Both movie and the book made Aron become a likable person to the readers and the views who are seeking for an inspiration about live and what we can succeed to do with the will to live. (This is in the end of the first paragraph)
Comments for the rough draft:
-Consider adding an aspect of persuasion to your claim
-Add more content and explanation of how the film/ book made the audience feel Ralston’s likable.
-Break up long paragraphs
-Use more quotes that apply to emotional appeal
-get rid of parts of long quotes that are not necessary/Redundant
-Grammatical errors.