– I need a paper talking about why I want to become a doctor. This is my personal statement for medical school.
-I want the first part to be this :
          (  As kids, we all dream of becoming either an astronaut or a princess. In my case        though, even as a child I already knew that all I wanted was to become a surgeon. Some kids would be playing with toys in their free time, meanwhile I would be dissecting worms just for fun.  As I was growing up I would always be watching YouTube videos of various surgeries and it ignited my passion of becoming a surgeon even more. I admire how much accuracy, patience, and precision you need for this type of field. Even to this day I randomly watch surgery videos at 2am. )
– All of this I want worded in a nice way to make it seem like I’m telling a story.

– After that I want to talk about what else inspired me to become a doctor.
          (. When I was 11 I had a near death experience.  I was vomiting for so many days and I had a lot of pain in my lower abdomen. I went to the doctor and he said this seems serious. So I got admitted into the hospital and they told me if I came later then I would not have made it. I loved how they constantly checked in on me and checked my IV and vitals every day.  They did surgery a week after because it turns out I had appendicitis. I had such a good child hood and this turned everything around. This whole experience gave me so much appreciation for everything that doctors and nurses do because without them, I probably would not be here today writing this.)

– I want this all rewritten in a way to also tell a story about the other reason why I want to become a doctor.
-Then I want the ending to tie everything together. I am also open to any suggestions. I want the medical schools to see my paper stand out from others.
-it has to be 1500 words maximum.